Sunday, March 14, 2010

My Tea with Madame Descartes and "Character"

"Does a character emerge from a story, or does a story merge from a character?"
This quote was taken out of chapter two on character and I find it most interesting to think about. I feel that this saying may have a tendency to equal each other out. I have found that both the story and the character developed simultaneously. For example in the poem, "My Tea with Madame Descartes", took almost half of the poem to simply describe the ambiance and character of Madame Descartes. Through vivid description, I was able to comprehend and believe the character that was being described as a women that is unmentionably beautiful.
"... Her beauty was singular, volcanic, viscous... as inevitable as lava moving slowly toward you. Even those few lines in her face seemed as delicate as those left by a leaf's edge, drawn by a child through the sand. Her beauty was so close to vengeance- one exacted by the world upon those of us so ordinary, so weak, we can barely admit its existence"
However, according to chapter two, "Building character isn't about mere features or characteristics; it's about the underlying "why" that makes the choice of features or characteristics apt." Towards the second half of the poem she begins to speak to her associate, who is having tea with Madame to interview her. When she began talking, she started off with talking about the war and what it was like during those years. Then she spoke on how she had married a man that was sweet but stupid, which I'm sure she thought of feelings of regret she wanted to pure out but did not. I felt as if she put what she truly wanted to do on hold, which was to model and travel the world.
"And I thought, on day, flipping through those old pieces of hers from Vogue and Life, I'd like to do that!"
So knowing that she was married to a dull man who wanted to take a trip to his brothers only helped her with the decision of leaving him to pursue her dreams.
"That was that; when my husband went back to Paris, I kissed him goodbye and took the train to Tibet-Lhasa-then on to Bangkok, Argentina, Chile..."
By asking "why" instead of "what" for character development, I was able to understand her desire for herself to go after what she wanted, which ultimately helped her throw caution out the window. She even stated in the last of the poem, "For such an illogical woman that's the last 'logical' thing I've ever done," as she referred to leaving her husband and following her passion.

When looking at literature, whether it be a poem, story or song, identification of characters can be established more definably by searching for "why" certain characters are the way they are, what brought them to this point, instead of "what" can a character be or "what" you think the character is. By reading chapter two on character helped me understand character a lot better!

12 comments:

  1. I enjoyed the description throughout this text. Not all stories have to be just a plot and then the characters develop. Like you said in class today just the wording is awesome. When he speaks of her beauty it just touches you in a different way rather than just a story with a beginning and ending.

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  2. I like the quote you chose... it is a very good question to ask especially after this story. I like when description is given in such detail of a character because you actually have a real picture in your mind of them.

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  3. very thought-provoking! Extremely well written and great ideas.The quote from the beginning is true both ways.

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  4. The chapter on character really did help me as well. We learn about characters and all the words that define them as we grow up through elementary school, but do we ever really come to terms with what a character really brings to a story? They are basically what the story consists of if you think about some stories.

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  5. "By asking "why" instead of "what" for character development, I was able to understand her desire for herself to go after what she wanted, which ultimately helped her throw caution out the window."

    Such great thoughts Brooke! I really do believe that sometimes we are so frustrated with reading because we can't find the answers we are looking for, but in reality it's just that our questions are the ones that are keeping us from understanding.

    Thank you for such great insight!

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  6. The chapter on character helped me understand character within stories as well. For example I had previously never heard of rounded or flat characters.

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  7. I liked your post and this chapter on characters, I used to always read popular books that met the plot outline. But after reading about the complexity of characters I find those stories more enjoyable and meaningful.

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  8. I agree with you, reading the chapter on character really does help in understanding the story. A lot of stories have an obvious plot, but when you understand why the characters are the way they are the story almost changes.

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  9. I agree that characters help you better understand the story. When it goes in depth about life and circumstances, it helps you understand better why a character is a certain way and why the story is following a specific outline. Sometimes without those tidbits of information yu can be lost in a text.

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  10. i totally agree this story really went well with our chapter on character because it really helped me pinpoint these characters and understand them better

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  11. I agree with you completely. Understanding a character is a key to understanding a story. I also liked "My Tea with Madame Descartes". I feel that this poem allowed the reader to understand the character completely. It made you feel as if the character was someone close to you that you can predict and understand there reasoning’s for what they do.

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  12. Characters are onions, sometimes appreciated but often overlooked. I think that asking questions is an amazing way to peel back the layers of truly well written characters.

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